If you owned the world...

KazumaSB wrote:

Lunar Wolf wrote:D:<

*Kazu laughs*

XD!!! Hau! That makes me laugh :3

Y'all need to comment 'bout the story D: so I can write more!

Hehehe!

The story was going good. We never got to find out what happened between Tsukinoke and the blonde lady. And how does this blonde lady fit into the story?

*Kazu prepares for the onslaught of remarks about blondes*

WELL, first of all! It is spelt, Blonde. =~=
;D
Let's see, the blonde, she's the female whom murdered the Copper, correct

Kazuma sits on his bed, and looks at his room with wonder. Momo, wanders around.

"Momo," he murmurs.
The cat spins around, her ears perking up at the mention of her name.
"Oh, nothing, sorry." Kazuma says, tired.

There has to be something, anything. He thinks. Something to tell me more about her, maybe I could learn her language a little more? He wonders.

is my language in the story sorta like latin amd is pretty much a dead language?

Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistake there.

I'm not sure if it's latin, I'm thinking if I want it to be an established language, an ancient language, or one that had never been known to humans.
But, yes, it's pretty much a dead language, few people know it. Few Caticlya people even speak it,

I love you too Momo :DDD!!!

By the way, can you call me some time? Like.. on a Saturday? x~x please? I wanna talk to you~!

Latin is pretty cool, but there are many other cool languages.

Yeahhh~

i'll try to call you Saturday!!>:]

Yay!!! *loves the face " >:] "

Tsukinoke, you've taken the life of many, you've tasted the blood of thousands, can you shed the tears for the souls you've lost? I have said once, I cannot help you, I cannot hurt you, as you do not exist in my realm, you are not of my creation and therefore, do not abide my rules. However, I can tell you this, what you are seeking, may cause your demise. Search for him if you must, but if you intend to kill me, my child incarnate, you will have my wrath.

Tsukinoke is within an ally, cleaning the blood off her hands and disposing of the clothes she'd stolen. Though mostly blind in animal form, her "human" eyes can see through the form of things called "aura" and "chii". She sees not as humans do, she sees things.. She can smell colors, hear shapes, taste words, see sounds, her system, is backwards and odd to posses. That man in the ally, did he deserve to die? Who cares, Tsukinoke thinks, he had no mother, no father, no sons or daughters. He was a nobody, just a husk floating about in this grim world.
"Just taking out the trash.." She murmurs. Though, not a male, Tsukinoke isn't a female either. "she" retains the form of a female, as it lures her prey and lowers their guard.

Do not ignore me, Tsukinoke. Beware that blonde, for within her satchel she wears at her side, hides a dangerous tool..

Lunar Wolf wrote:Yay!!! *loves the face " >:] "

*bows down* thank you thank you~XD

Ooo, kind of a dark update to the story, but it was good.

And yeah I like that smiley face too. It makes me think of a ninja that suddenly appears in front of the bad guy and gives him a whoopin'. >:]

XD thats why i use it~>:]

Hehe, awesome. :-E

hahahahahaXD that face always makes me laugh!~~

Hehe.

;3 now Luna back to your story!~

Yeah! Back to the story!

"Are you there?"
"Yeah I'm here,"
"Good.. Merge back to me now."

- - - -


"Hey, did you hear about the killings?"
"Yeah, kinda freaky huh?"
"No kidding, did you hear about that cop knocked out like, two days ago?"
"Oh, yeah! Bummer... his buddy says the blonde was a knockout."

"A knock-out, huh?" The first cop echos as he loweres his glasses.
This is Freddy ^ Freddy is a cop, needless to say, and he's got a thing for blondes, majorly so. His last wife was a blonde, and so was his Mistress ;D

"Um.. yeah, a knock-out, what?" The second cop replies,
This is Jim ^ a common guy, who likes to go home and replicate items from the past. Currently, he's trying to find the best way to come out of the closet to Freddy, and confess his feelings.

"Hey, Jim? Is that her? I think-Oh god! It is!" Fredwen grabs his gun and dashes to the girl in the center of the crowd. Jim, follows quickly.

"Just.. a little closer and I can find out who you are, you bratt," the blonde murmurs as she stalks the very girl who'd been stalking her. "You green-haired freak,"

Yay
The story continues.

x.x it's so hard with all these benchmarks, I need you guys to help, it is an interactive story, remember?

i'll try to help but i've got a lot going on right now too~:]